Good topic to talk about. Your video was shot nicely. The only thing I would say is maybe focus more on the interview rather than the stand up. Other than that good job :)
I think you picked a really good topic to do your video on. There are a lot of crosswalks like this, and they can be extremely dangerous, especially at night. I think you described the issue well in your stand-ups. I think it would have been a little better if you had another interview, or interviewed the person longer. Then you could have more variety, so it would not just be you talking about the issue.
Your issue was very interesting, and I understand since I relate to them as well. I found your interview with the girl was a bit too short and I would've liked to hear more from her story.
You picked an interesting topic to talk about. The duration of your video is shorter than two minutes. You have focused too much on your standup. I would recommend to have a bit longer interview. I would also recommend not to introduce yourself .Other than that, You have done a great job.
You expressed the problem clearly and it's easy for people to understand. I found that the lighting in one of the scenes is dark and your face is a little hard to see, maybe you can try shooting during the daytime next time!
You have a lot of interesting information in your standups and leave no room for confusion. I would just suggest more variety in the still shots you used next time, although I did like how you showed the area at night and during the day. Good job.
Really great subject. I loved all the stand ups and interviews. I understand that the problem occurs at night but maybe if you filmed one shot of the crosswalk in the day and one at night it would be really effective! Great video!
Good topic to talk about. Your video was shot nicely. The only thing I would say is maybe focus more on the interview rather than the stand up. Other than that good job :)
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ReplyDeleteoverall i like the idea and the video. but your voice was disturb by the noise that was coming from the vehicles behind you. otherwise it is good.
ReplyDeleteI think you picked a really good topic to do your video on. There are a lot of crosswalks like this, and they can be extremely dangerous, especially at night. I think you described the issue well in your stand-ups. I think it would have been a little better if you had another interview, or interviewed the person longer. Then you could have more variety, so it would not just be you talking about the issue.
ReplyDeleteYour issue was very interesting, and I understand since I relate to them as well. I found your interview with the girl was a bit too short and I would've liked to hear more from her story.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the topic of your video! I wish we could have seen a bit more of the interview or more interviews in general.
ReplyDeleteYou picked an interesting topic to talk about. The duration of your video is shorter than two minutes. You have focused too much on your standup. I would recommend to have a bit longer interview. I would also recommend not to introduce yourself .Other than that, You have done a great job.
ReplyDeleteYou expressed the problem clearly and it's easy for people to understand. I found that the lighting in one of the scenes is dark and your face is a little hard to see, maybe you can try shooting during the daytime next time!
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of interesting information in your standups and leave no room for confusion. I would just suggest more variety in the still shots you used next time, although I did like how you showed the area at night and during the day. Good job.
ReplyDeletethe topic you chosed is great and you explained the things very well but i just found the sound a bit disturbing. Overall, you did a good job
ReplyDeleteReally great subject. I loved all the stand ups and interviews. I understand that the problem occurs at night but maybe if you filmed one shot of the crosswalk in the day and one at night it would be really effective! Great video!
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